Sep. 2nd, 2008

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I was never overly pleased with how wordy the complete original beginning of Mary Sue's story went, so I'm editing it here for length. I think I got too wordy too quickly. But I'm hiding it behind one lj-cut so you can skip it if you like, and move on to the new installment (and hopefully I won't feel the need to rewrite any more! But if something later sounds repetitive, maybe you read it in the now-discarded original draft...) Please feel free to contribute; I myself was inspired to write more after reading a marvelous retelling of Prince Caspian.

1. Time and Relative Dimension in Story )

Okay, having edited that down to a manageable size, the second installment:

2. Lena Looks Into A Fanfic )

And, because I hit a good stopping point there but still want to continue,

3. What Su Found There )

So, any thoughts? (Other than tl;dr ?) Remember, I'd love to make this a shared project...

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